This cake has a few different colors on it, yet the decorator decided to write in a color that blended with the cake. Always remember to write in a color that will stand out from your design!

Once again, I see a cake that has something not centered on it, this time it is the twin blocks. My suggest would be to put the middle to blocks down 1st than to add the 1st and last letter. By doing that, the middle letters will be in the center of the cake.

This cake looks nice being fondant covered, but the decorator made a mistake by not finishing the ribbon in gold. The bow has 2 stripes of gold on each piece, yet the ribbon only has 1. I think the cake looks a bit unfinished and would have looked better with 2 strips of gold on the bow.

I think that if you placed this cake next to a real Louis Vouittion hat it would look similar, however the work is a bit sloppy. The writing is not centered and you can see the cardboard that the hat was placed on. The cardboard could have easily been trimmed down to be the same size as the cake or a border could have been added to cover it up.